PTE WE(#173 Harder Life)

Q. It is harder for children to grow up in the 21st century than it was in the past. How far do you agree with this statement? Give your opinions.

 

A.

The controversial topic concerning that it is harder for children to grow up in the 21st century never fails to attract public attention.

There has been a heated debate on whether growing up in the 21st century can benefit to children.

In this essay, I shall elaborate on my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument before deducing a proper conclusion.

 

First of all, it is quite reasonable for me to believe that the idea of children growing up in the 21st century can provide several merits.

The first point with regards to the issue is that the benefit of children growing up in the 21st century has contributed to the advancement of the subject.

To experience many things would be a convincing example to name but a few.

As a result, it could be beneficial for both old and new generations across the world.

 

In addition, it is commonly known as the fact that growing up in the 21st century can benefit to children.

Nevertheless, this statement does hold water to some extent.

Moreover, it should be pointed out that there are various advantages, such as good education systems.

Furthermore, there could be significant factors that ought to be considered.

 

In conclusion, due to the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that the positive impacts of children growing up in the 21st century far outweigh the drawbacks.

Therefore, I strongly recommend keeping this trend to take careful steps to mitigate the potential problems.

 

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